Story comment on “When Caroline Ran Away”

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“When Caroline Ran Away” is a creative story about two little girls, Louise and her sister Caroline .

When Caroline was thirteen years old, she asked her parents to let her go to a disco party at her friend Danielle’s home.  At first, her parents promised to let her go, soon they changed their mind because Caroline had a bad report from school.  Caroline was angry about that and she hardly spoke to any of the family for days.  She even ran away from home on the night of Danielle’s disco party.  Her parents and Louise were worried about her.  Louise couldn’t stop thinking of Caroline all day long.  It was terrible without Caroline for Louise.  Finally, Caroline came home safe, and Louise was excited about it. And Caroline regretted running away.

I think Caroline was lucky because no bad things or accidents happened to her when she was away home.   Actually, running away from home is irresponsible and cannot solve the problems.  On the contrary, it will only make our family worry about us.  Caroline and her parents should calm down and have a talk together.  They might have a better solution about the party and schoolwork.  I also think Caroline should learn to get her priorities right and understand her parents’ concern that work is more important than going to a party.