{"id":2046,"date":"2015-03-10T02:35:04","date_gmt":"2015-03-10T02:35:04","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/web02.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters2\/archives\/2046"},"modified":"2015-05-24T07:13:09","modified_gmt":"2015-05-24T07:13:09","slug":"a-letter-expressing-concerns-and-make-recommedatins-about-school-bus-service","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/archives\/2046","title":{"rendered":"A letter expressing concerns and make recommedatins about school bus service"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">Dear Sir\/Madam,<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">I am writing to express my concerns about the safety issues of private school buses. According to the statistics, the number of school bus accidents in the first 7 months of 2012 <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">has <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">double<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">d<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> that <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">of<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> the same period <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">in<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> 2011. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0A number of<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> children got hurt every time. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">However, a lot of these injuries can actually be avoided.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">According to the news articles, the main cause of the<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">se<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> accidents is the negligence of <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">the <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">safety procedures by the private school bus operator<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">s<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">One of the common scenarios is that students often knocked on the seats in front of them when the driver breaks the car suddenly. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">And this usually happens when the speeding car is nearly crashed. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">Such accidents reveal the drivers\u2019 neglect of the safe driving speed.<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0It may take less time to arrive at the destination by speeding, but at the same time<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">, it has<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> put the lives of the students at risk<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">.\u00a0 W<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">hat<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> will happen <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">if the driver could not brake the car in time? <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">Therefore the problem of speeding is worrying.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">Another situation which has raised my concern is the overload<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">ing<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> of many school buses. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">According to the law, three children <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">shorter than<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> 130cm can be counted as two people, so it is not illegal to let three children occupy two seats only. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">However, it leads to potential danger. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">The school buses will have insufficient safety belts and cannot prevent severe injury of students when traffic accidents really <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">take place<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">.<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">Also, the seats may not be ample enough and this increases the students\u2019 chance to get injured by falling off their seats. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">Therefore, <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">it is vitally important <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">that <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">every<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> child should have their own seat.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">The<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> problem <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">that worries me most is the absence of <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">safety belts<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">. S<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">ome school buses do not even install safety belts due to the high cost and inconvenience. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">I understand that according to the regulation, school bus service operators have to remove all safety belts every time when they send <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">the<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> school buses for inspection and undoubtedly this is quite troublesome <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">as<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> it takes the company time and manpower to do so.<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0 Some operators simply choose not to install the safety belts to avoid the inconvenience.\u00a0 <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">However, just as what I have mentioned in the previous paragraph, safety belts can protect students from getting serious<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">ly<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">injured<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> when traffic accidents really occur unfortunately. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">There is a piece of news reporting <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">about <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">a man who did not wear the safety belt went into a coma after being thrown out of the car in a crash. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">This proved the importance and the need for installing safety belts<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">.\u00a0 T<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">he cost is worth paying<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">.\u00a0 <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">W<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">hat can be more important than the passengers\u2019 safety?<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">To address the three safety issues I mentioned above, I have three recommendations for your association.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">First of all, your association c<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">ould<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> remind the private school bus service operators about the safety principle, such as installing safety belts and not getting overloaded.<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0Some education work may help. By reminding the operators that following proper safety procedures can help them gain reputation, I believe they will try their best to ensure passengers\u2019 safety.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">Second, I recommend you inspect the school buses <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">regularly<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">Examining the vehicles\u2019 condition every half a year may help the industry to maintain the quality and safety level of them. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">After the inspection, your association can <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">offer<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> a certificate to the operator to recognize its safe service. <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">Since the certificate can help the operator gain confidence from schools, I am sure they will cooperate and try to meet the safety requirements.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">Last but not least, you <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">should<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">constantly remind and <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">emphasize to the operators<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> bout relevant laws regarding safe operation of school buses.\u00a0 Stress<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> that speeding is illegal and send the news articles about accidents caused by speeding to the operators as warning may help raise their awareness of safe driving. Hopefully it will lead to a decrease in the number of school bus accidents.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">I h<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">ope your association <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">would consider<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> these recommendations and I look forward to the improvement in safety procedures <\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">carried out<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"> by the private school bus operators. Thank you for your attention.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">Yours faithfully,<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span style=\"font-family: 'AR Sinsu Medium B5';\" lang=\"EN-US\">Chris Wong\u00a0<\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12.1599998474121px; line-height: 1.3em;\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"MsoNormal\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">Chris Wong\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">Dear Sir\/Madam<\/span><\/p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\"><\/span><\/p><p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"text-align: justify; text-justify: inter-ideograph;\"><span lang=\"EN-US\">I am writing to express my concerns about the safety issues of private school buses. According to the statistics, the number of school bus accidents in the first 7 months of 201<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">ha<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">doubl<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"><\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">tha<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">o<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">the same perio<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">i<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">2011.<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">\u00a0A number o<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">children got hurt every time.<\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\"><\/span><span lang=\"EN-US\">However, a lot of these in.........<\/span><\/p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/archives\/2046\" class=\"read-more\">Read More<\/a>","protected":false},"author":14,"featured_media":8474,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_acf_changed":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-2046","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-uncategorized","language-en","classlevel-others","schoolyear-36"],"acf":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2046","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/14"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=2046"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2046\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":2227,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2046\/revisions\/2227"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/8474"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=2046"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=2046"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=2046"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}