{"id":1664,"date":"2014-02-10T02:33:48","date_gmt":"2014-02-10T02:33:48","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/web02.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters2\/archives\/1664"},"modified":"2015-05-24T07:11:33","modified_gmt":"2015-05-24T07:11:33","slug":"story-writing1","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/archives\/1664","title":{"rendered":"Story Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"\n

One night,<\/span>I awoke by the sound of distant thunder.<\/span>As I opened my eyes, I\u00a0<\/span>saw two strong men kissing!<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Oh my God! <\/span>It\u2019s<\/span> disgusting!’<\/span>I whispered.<\/span> \u201c<\/span>They must be gay.<\/span>‘The taller one was very thin with long and straight hair.<\/span>He wore a T-shirt with spots and jeans. The shorter one was fat with long and curly hair.<\/span>He wore a low-class dress.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

I <\/span>was supposed to<\/span> go to the volleyball team farewell party that night<\/span>. <\/span>Why\u00a0<\/span>was I <\/span>t<\/span>here?<\/span>Who were the two strong men?<\/span>I had a lot of questions.<\/span>But because I was very afraid of the two strong men, I couldn’t speak a word.<\/span>When I kept silent,<\/span>I heard them talking.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Honey,<\/span>she is still sleeping.<\/span>Should we wake her up?’<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Of course not!<\/span>We should call her father first and ask him for the ransom!’<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

All of a sudden<\/span>, I knew that I was kidnapped.<\/span>I had to keep silent and\u00a0<\/span>thou<\/span>g<\/span>ht of an idea to escape.<\/span>But I was to<\/span>o<\/span> scared to yell!<\/span>I couldn’t think of any good idea.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

Suddenly, I heard the sound of distant thunder <\/span>again <\/span>and <\/span>saw<\/span> different colours of light.<\/span> Soon I realized that i<\/span>t was the sound of fireworks.<\/span>Yes!<\/span>It\u00a0<\/span>was H<\/span>KSAR Establishment<\/span>D<\/span>ay.<\/span>There was a firework display at the Victoria\u00a0<\/span>Harbour.<\/span> \u201c<\/span>I had a brilliant idea!<\/span>\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

I ‘woke’ up and said, ‘<\/span>W<\/span>ho am I?<\/span>Where is it?’<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

The two strong men whispered, ‘It seems that she forgot everything, ”It seems\u00a0<\/span>that we hit her head too hard.<\/span>Should we say sorry to her?’<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Stupid!<\/span>We are kidnappers!<\/span>We can do everything we like.’<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

When I heard their dialogue, I <\/span>grinned secretly<\/span>.<\/span>Luckily,<\/span>they couldn’t <\/span>see<\/span>that<\/span>. The shorter one wanted to say sorry to me!<\/span>How stupid he was!<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

Although they were whispering, I could still hear them.<\/span>Maybe they were very strong so their voice was louder than the others.<\/span>I took a photo of my classmate, <\/span>\u00a0<\/span>Carrie, out of my wallet.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Hey!<\/span>Is this photo yours?<\/span>‘I asked the shorter one and also the stupid one.<\/span><\/p>\n

‘What?<\/span>Why do you have a photo of another girl?<\/span>I love you very much but\u00a0<\/span>you love girls!’<\/span> T<\/span>he taller one screamed madly.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘How come!<\/span>The photo is yours and you say that it’s mine?<\/span>I love you so <\/span>m<\/span>uch but you shouted at me because of that girl?’ replied the shorter one.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Shut your mouth up!<\/span>I need to sleep,’ an old woman shouted from above.<\/span>She was very annoyed.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

But they didn’t care about her.<\/span>They were very angry <\/span>at<\/span> each other because\u00a0<\/span>they thought that their <\/span>partner<\/span> was the owner of the photo of Carrie.<\/span>Soon, they\u00a0<\/span>started to fight!<\/span>My conspiracy succeed<\/span>ed<\/span>.<\/span>When they fought, the shorter one dropped his mobile phone.<\/span>I pcked it up <\/span>immediately <\/span>and called 999.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Hey!<\/span>Can you answer me where I <\/span>am<\/span>?’<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘You love girls very much so you answer her!’ the taller one said.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘I don’t like girls!<\/span>I am really mad at you!<\/span>And you, little girl, you are in your home,’ answered the shorter one who was the foolish one.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Oh my goodness!<\/span>How can you tell her?’ shouted the taller one.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘So what?<\/span>I like it.<\/span> Do<\/span>n’t you let me tell her?<\/span>I will answer her questions,<\/span>all her questions,<\/span> ok?!<\/span>‘<\/span> T<\/span>he shorter one called out loudly.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Oh my God!<\/span>So stupid!<\/span>We kidnapped her!<\/span>Kidnappers shouldn’t tell the hostage where she is.<\/span>Are you ok?’ cried the taller one.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Do you shout at me?<\/span>Oh my God!<\/span>I, Chan Tai Man, will not be your girlfriend anymore!’ the shorter one screamed.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Stop!<\/span>Where is my home?<\/span>Who am I?<\/span>And why would there be firework displaying?’ I asked.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘You are very annoying.<\/span>Listen!<\/span>Don’t ask any<\/span>more<\/span>!<\/span>You are the daughter of Lee Ka Shing, the richest <\/span>person<\/span> in Hong Kong.<\/span>This is one of your houses at <\/span>the <\/span>Peak,’ Chan Tai Man said.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

They didn’t know that their conversations were all heard by the police.<\/span><\/p>\n

Half an hour later, they were still fighting so they couldn’t hear some people walking by.<\/span>‘<\/span>B<\/span>ang!’ Some people shot the door with a gun.<\/span>Wow!<\/span>I haven’t seen a gun before.<\/span>It was awesome!<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Freeze!’ shouted the police.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘Damn!<\/span>How can you find here?<\/span>That’s a brilliant place for hiding here,’ cried Chan Tai Man.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

‘So you should ”thank” this clever girl,’ replied the police.<\/span>He laughed at me.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

I said to Chan Tai Man, ‘Anyway, thank you for your cooperation.’<\/span><\/p>\n

\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n

Eventually, I went home and laughed for two hours!<\/span>They are the silly kidnappers that I’ve ever seen!<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

One night<\/span>I awoke by the sound of distant thunder.<\/span>As I opened my eyes, I<\/span>saw two strong men kissing<\/span><\/p>

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'Oh my God<\/span>It\u2019<\/span>disgusting!<\/span>I whispered.<\/span><\/span>They must be gay.<\/span>'The taller one was very thin with long and straight hair.<\/span>He wore a T-shirt with spots and jeans. The shorter one was fat with long and curly .........<\/span><\/p>Read More<\/a>","protected":false},"author":14,"featured_media":8474,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_acf_changed":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1664","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-uncategorized","language-en","classlevel-others","schoolyear-35"],"acf":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1664","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/14"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1664"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1664\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":3511,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1664\/revisions\/3511"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/8474"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1664"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1664"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.carmelss.edu.hk\/buddingwriters\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1664"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}